I think that the content of the advertisement is delivered quite well. They say some lines together, and at the same time which makes the advertisement sound more cheerful and makes it sound better. The vocabulary that was used was appropriate, but I think that the words that were used were very common. The sound effects were good and improved the advertisement, but the one at the beginning was confusing and I didn’t get it. The advertisement was focused on the topic of advertising the hairspray the entire time through the whole advertisement. The conclusion summarized the whole advertisement; however, it was a bit confusing. The advertisement seemed mostly rehearsed and it sounded really enthusiastic, especially when they said their lines at the same time or when they said “Sweet Juicy.” Their grammar was also correct. The music was also very enthusiastic and it enhanced the advertisement because you were supposed to feel happy when drinking it, and the music sounded happy and it made me feel happy, which I think is very good. The transitions between the voices were mostly smooth, but at the beginning it seemed like the voice was cut off before she finished talking. The volume of the voices was the same throughout which is very good as the voices didn’t go up and down. The length of the advertisement, I think was good; it didn’t seem too long or too short. It also kept me interested when they raised their voices to a high pitch; it was really funny, especially at the end. I would recommend that next time they would be a little more careful where they cut the voices. Also, they should choose sound effects that can be recognized when it is first heard since I couldn’t figure out what it was at the beginning.
i think that their content is excellent. when they speak the dialogues are connected together. i like their vocab, but it was repeated too much. the conclusion was confused. but i love their sound effect they were improved their advertisement just by their sound effect. they were put a lot of feelings in their advertisement. the transitions were smooth. because it not too long or too short. it keep me to like to listen to their advertisement. i love their transition. also, their grammar was very good and they used the correct grammar. i think that next time they will need to be cautious of the conclusion to make it no confusing. because the conclusion will summarize everything. CAREFUL about the CONCLUSION plz!
"The advertisement was focused on the topic of advertising the hairspray the entire time through the whole advertisement." It's supposed to be "the juice" not hairspray. Sorry.
I think that the content of the advertisement is delivered quite well. They say some lines together, and at the same time which makes the advertisement sound more cheerful and makes it sound better. The vocabulary that was used was appropriate, but I think that the words that were used were very common. The sound effects were good and improved the advertisement, but the one at the beginning was confusing and I didn’t get it. The advertisement was focused on the topic of advertising the hairspray the entire time through the whole advertisement. The conclusion summarized the whole advertisement; however, it was a bit confusing.
ReplyDeleteThe advertisement seemed mostly rehearsed and it sounded really enthusiastic, especially when they said their lines at the same time or when they said “Sweet Juicy.” Their grammar was also correct.
The music was also very enthusiastic and it enhanced the advertisement because you were supposed to feel happy when drinking it, and the music sounded happy and it made me feel happy, which I think is very good.
The transitions between the voices were mostly smooth, but at the beginning it seemed like the voice was cut off before she finished talking. The volume of the voices was the same throughout which is very good as the voices didn’t go up and down. The length of the advertisement, I think was good; it didn’t seem too long or too short. It also kept me interested when they raised their voices to a high pitch; it was really funny, especially at the end.
I would recommend that next time they would be a little more careful where they cut the voices. Also, they should choose sound effects that can be recognized when it is first heard since I couldn’t figure out what it was at the beginning.
i think that their content is excellent. when they speak the dialogues are connected together. i like their vocab, but it was repeated too much. the conclusion was confused. but i love their sound effect they were improved their advertisement just by their sound effect. they were put a lot of feelings in their advertisement.
ReplyDeletethe transitions were smooth. because it not too long or too short. it keep me to like to listen to their advertisement. i love their transition.
also, their grammar was very good and they used the correct grammar.
i think that next time they will need to be cautious of the conclusion to make it no confusing. because the conclusion will summarize everything. CAREFUL about the CONCLUSION plz!
"The advertisement was focused on the topic of advertising the hairspray the entire time through the whole advertisement." It's supposed to be "the juice" not hairspray. Sorry.
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